Dec 2013
A goldfish swimming
it's open mouth closing
A deafening sound
You have two lines here
Please set this up in haiku
Infuriating
Dedicated soul
beaten by authority
Amusing triumph
The droplets gathered
pools of water on the ground
All bland and boring
it's open mouth closing
A deafening sound
You have two lines here
Please set this up in haiku
Infuriating
Dedicated soul
beaten by authority
Amusing triumph
The droplets gathered
pools of water on the ground
All bland and boring
I decided to take a poetry course. The first part was my first submission. It was rejected. I responded by using their reply as my second submission. They accused me of not taking it seriously which prompted my third submission. I decided they may also reject that so I submitted the final haiku.
