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Poem Title

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This will be the smallest, most insignificant, most trivial,

And most forgettable poetic parable anyone has ever written

Because for once I’ve been wrung of all my deep evocations

I’ve been whittled of my angular description of the commonplace

Of verbose, grandiose trajectories mapped out

By minds I will never exist alongside but I will sure emulate

 

I have sat down and asked myself, innumerable times,

“Okay, so how will I describe the sunrise now?”

And more importantly, perhaps more existentially:

“What about the sunset?”

What colors haven’t I used, what other comparable thing

Haven’t I eluded those colors to,

And what kind of uncharted, beautiful, spiritually-boggling human emotion

Hasn’t been tapped by this setting star until right now,

Right as I string together letters like they’ve

Never been strung before?

 

There’s the endless wellspring of my poetic—

Oh, look, there I go, visualizing thoughts and feelings

As a mystical, water-associated apparatus

(It’s my go-to)

For a time more innumerable than the sunrise.

 

I’m getting tired of it,

And I can’t imagine how mind-blowingly dull it must be for you

So I’m going to try it like this:

I see the sunset again, and tonight it’s very pretty.

 

But, poet, this kind of routine, boring description

Doesn’t do much for me.

I know what a sunset is, I’ve seen it

My three year old can probably

Get a pretty accurate crayon drawing penned out in a few seconds

And that will hardly distinguish itself from

What you’ve made the sunset out to be

 

But, poet, from all across the world, from their unique angles

All the aspiring poets gaze toward the same sun,

Whether in setting, whether rising, or hung there in the sky

And describe it as a tantalizing metaphor

 

And then relate that sun

To a deep, embedding, defining emotion or craving for human connection

As if to say,

Yes

I see the sun that way too

I feel that way too

 

And then those poets submit their poems to publishing

And watch the sunset as any normal person would

Once they’re out of the mode.

In fact, what’s on television? / Shut the blinds, Dylan,

There’s a glare on the screen.

 

“Okay”

 

This poem hasn’t brought itself out there, out to you

As a grand accomplishment of absolute detachment

As a way to try to break the barrier of poetry once again,

To define itself as a new genre, or an edgy statement the author

Very desperately intends his audience ‘gets’

Or even to prove an angle nobody has ever seen or attempted before

Because how I am supposed to know how you think?

Or what you see, and how you see it?

 

This poem is a message of the ordinary,

That it’s okay, it’s absolutely fine, to remove the mysticism from the mundane

And understand the world as a beauty in itself,

One that doesn’t need the aloof, grand, mystical verbosity of poetry

To be felt as something poetic

 

In fact, I won’t even leave you to ponder the greater meaning of it,

Of this line, or that line. I will say it here,

At the end, at the climactic and awesome point of emotional delivery

That all poetry intends:

I see the sunset again, and tonight it’s very pretty.

 

 

 

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