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Amanda Ramsey
Poems
Aug 2010
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I fell for you like quicksand
Going kicking and screaming through the heart of you
Slipping soul deep in to the thought provoking grains of you
And in this world absolving love I sank
Drifting into the fullness of us
Or what I thought us was
Because the further I delved into you the closer I got to suffocating
The fullness turned to emptiness and there was no room to move
I ceased to exist
I became her
That girl I never wanted to be
But when you can't see, can't breathe, can't move
Hopes and wishes will leave you
Kicking and screaming
See, I fell for you like quicksand
At first resisting then accepting the fact that I was stuck
Caught up in the muk of we
And if you ask me, we were never meant to be
A couple forged by fate
To teach a lesson like burning stoves
You left me with scars too deep to see
But I learned from you
Learned to trap and flow
Like quicksand
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Amanda Ramsey
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