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A Thomas Hawkins
Poems
Aug 2010
Edible similes
Your words sting like vinegar
when spilled on open wounds
They carve their way into me
like eating ice cream with a spoon
Like lemonade thats sugar free
they have a bitter taste
but unlike health warnings on cigarettes
their message goes not to waste
As with most recipe disasters
like when I cooked Fish Ragu
I'm not sure where I got things wrong
just what exactly did I do?
Written by
A Thomas Hawkins
Canada
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