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Devotion

by photodude

The light dies into bruised grey, and something in you sharpens— a flicker behind the eyes that feels like recognition and warning at once. The room thickens. Salt and skin and silence, heavy with what it knows is coming. I’ve been waiting for this exact moment without ever naming it. There is a breath before the world tilts— the way your body stills, the air tightening between us as though bracing for impact. Not fear. Not surrender. That trembling place where both begin to blur. I take all of it. Every part. The tension rising between us, the way your breath falters as if caught on something you can’t quite speak. Your stillness becomes a language— a held note, a quiet invocation that pulls me deeper into whatever this is we keep circling. You find your own voice then— not words, but the raw, unguarded sounds of someone meeting themselves in the dark. Crude and sacred in the same breath, a devotion carved from the space between restraint and unraveling. I feel you pause at the pulse of it, trembling at the edge. Your silence louder than any cry. Not yet. The moment hasn’t finished becoming itself. Let me study the fault lines beneath your calm, the tremor beneath your voice, the truth that only rises when everything else falls away. You open before me like something worth slowing down for— a revelation both pagan and holy, your breath catching as I stretch the moment until time forgets its place. Who knew desire could get this close to religion— a godless man brought to his knees, a woman calling out to heaven without ever speaking its name. When the room finally breaks— pale light creeping across the floorboards, the walls holding their silence like witnesses— we collapse into the aftermath. Spent. Quiet. Caught between ruin and revelation, wondering who consumed whom, and if the difference ever mattered. Because the hunger doesn’t end. It only sleeps. Patient as a tide, rising again and again to pull us back to the place where we come undone and begin in the same breath.
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photodude
54 / M / North Carolina USA
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Written by
photodude
54 / M / North Carolina USA
Published
2d ago
Time
4m
Tags
#devotion#ritual#tide#ruin#revelation
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