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The Loan We Took on Love

A naughty kiss between two innocent faces— she calls you over: "I need you right now, man." Maybe she's looking for a right-now man. You arrive super late as her man— ironically, flying past time as her Superman. Wouldn't you cape your fears, longing for each other's presence; though the present won't keep us from becoming past tense. The very thought of us being alone together— banking on the only moment we truly have. You took out a loan; don't you dare lose your interest now.
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OddOdysseyPoet
27 / M / Zimbabwe
For You?
Written by
OddOdysseyPoet
27 / M / Zimbabwe
Published
7d ago
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21·86
Notes

When these poems are read together, they begin to feel less like separate pieces and more like one long conversation between a heart and itself.

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#lovepoetry#modernpoetry#wordplay#romanticwriting#spokenword#loveandtime#emotionalwriting#minimalpoetry#humanconnection
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