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The Overly Dramatic Window

⭐ THE UNPOLISHED SEASON — Poem VII

 

The window opened with more noise than necessary,

a long, uneven groan

that sounded less like weather

and more like a complaint

it had been saving all week.

The frame shuddered once,

as if reconsidering the whole idea

of being a window at all.

 

The light came in sideways,

not soft,

not warm,

just a tired strip of brightness

that landed on the floor

like it had missed its cue.

It illuminated nothing important –

only dust,

and the corner of a chair

that wasn’t asking for attention.

 

A small breeze passed through,

and the window responded

as if it had been struck by news.

The glass rattled,

the latch trembled,

the whole frame performing

a kind of exhausted melodrama

over something

that barely qualified as air.

 

In the afternoon,

it caught my reflection

and stretched it

in the least forgiving direction.

Not symbolic,

not meaningful –

just the kind of distortion

that happens

when a surface has given up

on accuracy.

 

Outside,

the street offered nothing worth framing.

Inside,

the room didn’t ask for a view.

The window stood between them,

uncertain,

like a worker assigned

to two departments

that had both forgotten

to include it in the schedule.

 

By evening,

the glass had stopped rattling.

It settled into a heavy, unclasped silence,

like an actor who finally realized

the theater had been empty for hours.

I didn’t reach over to shut it.

I just let the draft

settle across my ankles –

unapologetically cold,

unapologetically there.

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Written by
VerseBuster
48 / M / Poland
Published
May 25
Lines·Words
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Notes

“The Overly Dramatic Window” is part of the series The Unpolished Season, which explores ordinary things at the moments when they refuse to be metaphors. It is a poem about a window that overdoes it – not because it wants to, but because that is how it was built, and about a narrator who no longer tries to fix the world, but instead lets it exist in its own, inelegant rhythm.

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#unpolished#season#everyday#objects#quiet#drama#minimalism#urban#interior#tired
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