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Who am I - vII

by nicoarty

Years ago i wrote a poem With words of limitless potential, Youth, Optimism, Anxiety, Stength I look at them now, empty and hollow Knowing somewhere along the way The centre of who i was left Leaving only a shell to change And I Became the mother The partner The builder The grower Became the one who payed bills Passed qualifications Got jobs I Became over and over, Stepped forwards into role after role Person after Person Thing after thing Until I was a cumulation of shells of potential dreams And Each new shell a footprint in my life Not of what I would become But of who I Had become by choice Now the emptiness grows, no matter how much i change And i realise that i am Screaming inside, pain and seething rage That looking up from my path i see, none of the footprints lead where i thought To see that in the mirror is an empty shell, Dreams closed off by the steps I had wrought I hadnt just gone in circles I had walked in erratic lines, then leaps All leading one way or another Away from who i had wanted to be And now i sit still, silent, empty Dreaming of who i couldve been, Who i Wanted to be Somehow i missed the turnings, though now i understand How someone becomes so preoccupied with 'who will i be' That they forget 'Who i am' So years ago i wrote a poem Now i'm writing one again Thinking of that child's dream, i know "Lost" is who i am
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Published
May 21
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Trying to find space for myself again. Remembered one of my first poems from when i was first trying to find my identity and looked back on the subject from the other side of the hill, havung lost it again.

I miss myself.

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#identity#adulthood#growth#lost#mental#health#dreams
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