What's up with the foul language, that flows from your lips?  I am out to truly learn; can you suggest some good tips?
What's up with the words that does not sound healthy?  I'm out to gain knowledge, and even become wealthy.
What's up with the lyrics that's bringing people down?   Have you sat and listened, how the words really sound?
What's up with the music that fails to edify?  You're defeating the purpose; you're causing people to die.
What's up with that!
By, Sandra J. Nailing