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The Spoon That Lost Its Patience

⭐ THE UNPOLISHED SEASON — Poem IV

 

The spoon gave up first.

Not the coffee,

not the light,

not even the fridge

with its night‑shift sighs –

the spoon.

 

It lay in the mug

like a cold, silver protest,

refusing to stir anything

that even resembled effort.

 

I nudged it.

It didn’t move.

I nudged it again.

It responded with the quiet authority

of someone who has already drafted

their resignation letter.

 

Apparently,

it was tired of being the only thing

expected to stay polished

in a kitchen full of quitters.

 

The coffee had abandoned

its rescue business yesterday.

The light still squinted

like it hadn’t slept.

The silence –

the same one that’s been gathering

its own dust and hair since last night –

sat between us,

unhelpful as ever.

 

And I –

well, I wasn’t exactly

a motivational poster either.

 

So the spoon decided

it was done performing.

Done swirling hope into mornings.

Done pretending to be helpful.

 

It leaned against the mug’s rim,

trembling slightly –

not from effort,

but from the relief

of finally choosing itself.

 

And honestly,

I couldn’t blame it.

Some days,

even the silverware

has better boundaries

than I do.

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Written by
VerseBuster
48 / M / Poland
Published
May 18
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Notes

The spoon finally joins the rest of the kitchen in its slow-motion strike.

After watching the coffee resign and the light stumble in sideways, it decides it’s done performing.

A small, tired rebellion – perfectly in tune with the season.

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#theunpolishedseason#contemporarypoetry#quietabsurdity#everydayobjects#humorandstillness#kitchenpoem#minimalism#unpolishedself#domesticrebellion#newwork
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