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The Tender Brutal Things

by Doriangrayisme

I have been the instrument that required no maintenance. The hand that steadies rooms. The eye that reads pressure systems. The mouth that knows which words will land where. For years, I was fluency itself— adjusting, calibrating, precise. I am recalibrating now. There is a word I need: responsiveness— not the old kind, where I bend toward you, but the new kind, where I ask to be bent toward me. Where my yielding is not a gift I perform but a threshold I protect. The body knew this already. The body stopped mid-gesture, the way a tuning fork stops when the frequency it was built for finally enters the room. My hands go still not from calculation but from asking to be held while they tremble. There is another word: tenderability— the capacity to require care without apologizing for the cost. Not fragility — strength that refuses to masquerade as stone. I am done arranging rooms for other people's courage. I want someone to enter my unsteady architecture and choose to stay anyway. Not despite the tremor. Because of it. Because they understand — precision without maintenance is just another word for breaking in slow motion. I am asking to be regarded while I am still becoming— not after I've settled, not when I'm safe to touch. Now— While the glass is warm. While my hand is on the door. This is the only hardness that lives.
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May 18
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