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Juno

The bright light blinded

As I stood there and trembled,

The shake not from fear

But from nerves

Sleek, black metal

Clutched tightly in my hands,

Polished yet worn all the same

 

The Sun stood there mocking,

Talking down and blinding,

And before I knew it,

I took aim

The trigger was pulled

By fingers I didn’t recognize

As my own

 

The bullet flew past,

Just missing his head,

And I realized what I’d just done

He started to laugh,

And ridicule some more,

But by then The Stars had shown

 

Punishment was imminent,

Yelling moreso,

But I couldn’t help but smile in the face of it

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Written by
orion_stellanis
14 / M / America
Published
May 17
Lines·Words
23·107
Notes

i wrote this in like 10 minutes for a creative writing assignment its actually kinda ****

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#freeverse#sun#moon#stars#violence#gun
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