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In the pool

It starts almost nothing- a piano note sinking into water like it already knows it won’t survive the surface. Then another. And the pool remembers us. Somewhere between breath and impact we are back there again- not in order, not in time, but in fragments that refuse to stay separated. Your hands above the keys. Water climbing sound until it forgets how to be sound. The first time everything felt like it was still allowed to happen. Then the fight we never had words for-motion, collision, the world breaking its own rhythm- and underneath it all, that same drowned melody still playing. I see it in flashes: your reflection bending in tile-water. My leaving before I knew I was leaving. The moment even silence started to feel heavy. And when everything finally drops- when air, water, memory, and movement all hit the same point- there is no ending. Only the note, still falling, refusing to become anything but itself even underwater.
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May 10
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I finished the chainsaw man movie and I wanted to write a poem about the song in the pool because it was genuinely so beautiful. I hope I did the piece justice🤞

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