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Me vs. the tea

They say:be authentic

But didn’t tell you how to "stay authentic"

How to stay authentic"YOU" how to stay authentic"ME"

When every encounter,every relationship urges me to leave parts of me .As a child i loved brown rock candy cubes,they were supposed to sweeten tea,but I preferred to taste the utter sweetness just by letting it dissolve in my mouth.

And I can’t help but see the metaphor in it now.

I am like a rock cube that meets tea,and without wanting it,I lose myself in it,I surrender my shape,and have no means to recollect what I gave.But with the heat of the liquid,I had no chance to stay whole.

The tea is still the tea,just sweeter.

But I ,I became just an adjective.

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Written by
Petrichorblue
F / Germany
Published
May 5
Lines·Words
8·123
Notes

I often feel suffocated in proximity of people,I feel swallowed by their presence,I just wanted to explore that emotion.

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