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Candle

You relit the flame

But took the spark away

So now I’m just slowly burning

Without a passion

Nothing interesting

Nothing worrying

Nothing painful

You think.

 

It’s a slow burn

Caused by the burdens

You gave me to carry.

You never asked

Whether I was able to hold

Whether I was ready

Whether I wanted this.

Perhaps if you did ask

I wouldn’t be burning.

 

But now I’m dripping.

My wax stains the table

Like the blood that

Remains on the bathroom tiles.

No matter how much I try

Not to melt

On your already damaged table,

I can’t help but be vulnerable

To your kindness.

 

But one day I know

You won’t be able to clean up

All my drips of blood and

 

I’ll destroy myself

And I’ll destroy you.

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Written by
remember_me
17 / F
Published
May 3
Lines·Words
31·131
Notes

00:28 4/5/26 perhaps one day I’ll tell you, when your table is fixed. But until then this will be a burden I’ll have to carry myself.

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