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Afloat

How foolish of us

To feed the illusion

That we're somehow

In control

 

When we're drifting

At the mercy of the

Raging sea

 

And can barely afford

To stay afloat

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Written by
PeterGerstenmaier
32 / M / Genève
Published
May 2
Lines·Words
9·30
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Human nature at its best

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#foolish#illusion#control#afloat
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