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At the Cabin's Edge, Where Quiet Lives

Two voices, one sanctuary—where stillness gathers and the heart steadies.

 

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Introduction:

These two poems unfold around the same quiet cabin set among trees, flowers, and open air. In “Breathing in Beauty,” Elizabeth writes from the garden behind the cabin, where color, scent, and stillness gather in a gentle embrace. In “Along the Lake’s Edge,” Adam walks the path leading from the cabin toward the water, following the line where forest and lake meet in evening calm. Together, the poems create a shared landscape of rest and renewal, each offering a different way of stepping into peace.

 

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"Breathing in Beauty"

by Elizabeth Scott (Songbird0926)

 

The softest scents drift through the open window,

calling my name,

longing for my company.

I step through the cabin's back door

and into a world of brilliant colors

blending together,

the light perfume of beauty

enveloping me in a gentle hug.

Watercolors for my soul

sway in the slight breeze,

turning their heads patiently

towards the sun

yet reaching arms towards me,

like small children wanting to be picked up.

I slowly breathe in the stillness around me,

thankful for the peace present here.

Sun, sky, flowers -

my heart steadies as I feel

the calm in the air

and see

colors touch the sky

with wonder,

giving me hope for tomorrow,

and I know

I'm finally home.

 

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“Along the Lake’s Edge”

By Adam Wojcicki (VerseBuster)

 

The cabin settles behind me

as I step into the hush of evening,

following the narrow trail

that winds between pine and water.

 

The lake lies open and unhurried,

a sheet of silver breathing

with the soft rise of wind.

Shore‑grass leans toward the ripples,

whispering in small, patient voices.

 

I walk slowly,

letting the quiet gather around my shoulders—

the scent of cedar,

the cool drift of air from the water,

the steady rhythm of my own steps

on the soft earth.

 

Branches tilt toward the fading light,

catching the last gold of the sun,

and the path curves gently

as if guiding me forward

without asking anything in return.

 

Here,

between forest and lake,

I feel the day loosen its grip.

The colors soften,

the world exhales,

and something inside me settles too,

a quiet knowing

that this place holds room for me.

 

And I walk on,

unhurried,

at peace,

carrying the calm of the cabin

into the deepening dusk.

 

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Written by
Songbird0926
50 / F
Published
Apr 26
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Joint Author’s Note:

This collaboration began with a simple setting: a cabin in the woods, a place to return to for quiet and clarity. Elizabeth’s poem lingers in the flowers behind the cabin, where light, color, and scent steady the heart. Adam’s poem moves outward toward the lake, tracing a slow walk along the shoreline as the day softens into dusk. Though the viewpoints differ, both pieces belong to the same space — a small sanctuary shaped through language, attention, and shared creative imagination.

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