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Shackles by name

They speak of freedom

as though it were a bird—

something with wings,

something that chose the sky.

 

But I have never seen it.

 

Only the echo of a word

repeated by mouths

that eat from measured hands.

 

Once, they say,

you worked the soil with your own breath,

and the earth answered you plainly—

no ledger, no witness,

only the quiet contract

between hunger and harvest.

 

The fruit was yours

because your hands remembered it into being.

 

Then came the crown—

not as thunder,

but as a soft geometry of power,

drawing lines where none had lived before.

 

You were told:

You belong now to something greater.

 

And so the field divided itself—

one portion for your living,

one portion for the unseen appetite of the king.

 

Later, the sky was claimed too.

 

Not the sky itself—

but its meaning.

 

A house was built for the invisible,

and you were told:

Give again,

for your soul must also pay its passage.

 

So your bread grew thinner,

your hands more obedient,

your silence more devout.

 

And still they called this order.

 

Then came the naming—

not the tender naming of a mother,

but the cold architecture of record.

 

You were no longer simply John,

a voice in the wind,

a body known by its gestures.

 

You became John of something—

fastened, indexed,

a fixed point in the grand arithmetic.

 

Thomas the shoemaker,

bound not only to leather,

but to the gaze that counted him.

 

A name, they said,

to make you known—

 

but known to whom?

 

To the eye that measures,

to the hand that collects,

to the system that does not forget.

 

The surname—

a quiet iron,

worn not on the wrist,

but in the breath.

 

Passed down like heirloom chains,

polished until they gleam like identity.

 

And so the great lie ripens:

 

That this name is yours.

That this place is chosen.

That this giving is freedom.

 

But listen—

beneath the language,

beneath the centuries of agreement—

 

there is a tension,

a low and ceaseless chord:

 

The memory of unowned fields,

of unnamed selves,

of a life that did not answer

to invisible masters.

 

We have not been freed.

 

Only refined.

 

The shackles made softer,

the chains taught to sing—

until we mistook their music

for our own voice.

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