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What Is Wrong With Me?

What is wrong with me

that one asterisk row

can throw my whole body

into alarm?

 

Not disagreement.

Not irritation.

Alarm.

 

A tiny string of stars- *****

and suddenly my chest goes tight,

my thoughts start slamming drawers,

my jaw locks,

my hands go cold,

then hot,

then useless.

 

Fight.

Flight.

Freeze.

All three

crowding the doorway at once.

 

Stop.

It is only

a clerical error,

a $2.99 AI filter

purchased in haste by an absent admin,

a cheap, blind machine pawing at our lines.

 

What is wrong with me?

 

I have lived too long

through so many versions of this.

 

I have watched ministers

lean over culture

with their disinfectants and scissors.

I have watched them warn, label, soften, trim.

I have watched whole eras

ask art to apologize

for having a body.

 

So why this?

Why now?

Why this absurd little mark

sends me so quickly

into white animal panic.

 

Is it the child in me?

Who witnessed adults rename pain

until truth sat in the corner

with its mouth washed out.

 

Is it the books I chose?

All those years reading the wild ones,

the heretics, the drunks, the holy fools,

the queers and runaways,

the swamp prophets and asphalt mystics,

learning that language is the last real house

some people ever get.

 

Is that it?

 

That the written line is not content to me.

Not copy.

Not mood.

Not product.

It is breath made visible.

A hand on the table saying

I was here.

I wanted.

I feared.

I knew.

 

And if some backend ghost

slides in and powders over the mouth,

I do not see moderation.

I see desecration.

 

Should it be like this?

Probably not.

 

Should I care this much?

Probably not.

 

I overreact.

 

Because I am not only seeing

a damaged word.

 

I am seeing the body

taught to doubt its own tongue.

And I cannot stand it.

 

Maybe I am only this:

Someone who still believes

the line should arrive whole.

The body should arrive whole.

The word should reach the reader

with its dirt, its blood, its sweat,

its bad manners,

its human weather intact.

 

And if that makes me excessive,

touchy,

difficult,

unfit for the new upholstered silence,

 

then what is wrong with me

is that I still think a poem

should be allowed

to keep its teeth.

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Written by
William-A-Gibson
M / Cambria CA
Published
Apr 12
Lines·Words
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Notes

The internal censorship filter is removed as of March 13 but the experience remains strange.

Tags
#selfdoubt#alarm#aifilter#algorithm#frustration#rageaholic
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