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Between Tongues

An orchestra of embers in the quarry of our words

 

We meet in the hallway between tongues,

your words arrive barefoot,

mine wear shoes that pinch.

 

I offer a sentence –

it blooms in my mouth like jasmine,

reaches you

as a handful of dry stems.

 

You smile in the wrong places.

I laugh half a beat late.

Our silences are fluent,

our speech

a quarry of mismatched stones.

 

Still, my heart plays its unruly symphony –

violins striking sparks on granite,

trumpets flaring like embers in wind,

each note a flare against your mountain calm.

In the pause between us

there is a hollow no kindness fills,

yet I keep planting –

hoping my fire will find –

 

your hidden vein of warmth,

and your stone remember

how to hold the sun.

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Written by
MidnightVerse
47 / M / UK
Published
Mar 29
Lines·Words
24·133
Notes

This piece embodies the fault line between abundance and reserve, where emotion overflows in one heart but meets the stillness of another. The imagery blends music and elemental forces so the tension plays out in sound, heat, and weight rather than direct statement. The required line, “a hollow no kindness fills”, is placed at the emotional pivot, where silence becomes as vivid as fire.

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