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Borrowed Silence

The fog came in low around me,

as if trying to remember the shape of the street.

A single lamp hummed, soft as a held breath.

Somewhere in the distance, a window closed like a quiet decision.

The cobblestones glistened faintly, rehearsing the memory of rain.

 

I paused, unsure whether the cold on my skin

belonged to the weather

or to something I had carried with me into the dark.

 

A shadow moved at the far end of the street, slow and unhurried,

as if it, too, were listening

for whatever the night had not yet said.

And in that moment, I felt the faintest shift inside me,

as though the silence had placed a hand on my shoulder.

 

The shadow paused, as if listening again,

then vanished into the deeper dark beyond the lamp.

 

I stood there a moment longer, unsure

whether it had taken something from me, or returned it—

only aware, at last,

of the quiet weight

where the silence

had rested its hand.

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Written by
VerseBuster
48 / M / Poland
Published
Mar 8
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A moment suspended in fog and half light, where silence feels borrowed and the night seems to listen back.

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#atmospheric#fog#night#street#mystery#introspection#quiet#moments#shadows#mood
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