Hello PoetryVoting

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsHeartedHistoryMy poemsNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsHeartedHistoryMy poemsNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

The Shifting City: The Gallery of Echoes (6)

A long hall of pale stone. The walls looked bare until I walked deeper. Then the echoes appeared – silhouettes of the lives I almost lived.

Me in another city. Me boarding a train I never took. Me laughing with someone whose face I couldn’t quite see. Not regrets. Acknowledgments.

At the center, a glass sphere held the sum of my almosts. I touched it. It warmed. And the ache softened. I left lighter.

 

 

The Shifting City: “The Gallery of Echoes” (poem)

 

I walk into the hall of pale stone

and at first the walls look empty,

smooth as unbroken ice.

But then the air shifts,

and the room inhales,

and the outlines begin to rise.

 

Not portraits.

Not ghosts.

Just the faint blue silhouettes

of the lives I almost lived.

 

One flickers to my left –

a version of me boarding a train

I never took,

his coat catching the wind

of a city I never learned to pronounce.

He doesn’t look back.

 

Another stands at a window

in an apartment I nearly rented,

watering a plant I never owned,

humming a tune I never learned.

He seems content,

but he is not me.

 

A third sits at a café table

with someone whose face

is blurred by possibility.

Their laughter ripples

like a memory I can almost touch

but never quite claim.

 

I walk slowly,

and the echoes shift with me,

as if adjusting their distance

out of courtesy.

 

None of them accuse me.

None of them beckon.

They simply exist –

parallel lines

that never intersected

but still shaped the geometry

of my life.

 

At the center of the hall

a glass sphere waits,

its surface swirling

with faint colors

like breath on winter air.

 

I place my hand on it.

 

Warmth rises through my palm,

and for a moment

I feel every version of myself

that could have been –

not with longing,

not with grief,

but with a strange,

quiet recognition.

 

The sphere dims,

as if bowing,

and the echoes soften

into a gentle blue haze.

 

I exhale.

The hall exhales with me.

 

When I turn to leave,

the silhouettes remain behind –

not abandoned,

not dismissed,

but finally at rest.

 

I step back into the city

lighter than I entered,

carrying only the life

that is mine.

Request permission to use this poem
Written by
VerseBuster
48 / M / Poland
Published
Feb 26
Lines·Words
72·383
Notes

From the cycle “Presence in the Ruins: The Shifting City.” “The Gallery of Echoes” takes place in a quiet blue hall where the speaker meets silhouettes of the lives they almost lived. These aren’t regrets but possibilities—paths not taken, selves that hovered at the edge of becoming. By touching the warm sphere at the room’s center, the speaker recognizes these unlived lives without grief, and leaves lighter, carrying only the life that is truly theirs.

Tags
#shiftingcity#memory#ruins#emotionalgeography#presenceintheruins#introspective#healingjourney#acceptance
Permission

Request to use this poem

Tell VerseBuster how you would like to use it. We review requests before forwarding them.

AboutBlogFAQPrivacyTermsContact
© 2009-2026 Hello Poetry/v27.0 by @eliotyork
Explore
Hello PoetryVoting
Write