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mother life, father death.

like the bits of pieces,

of choco chip cookies,

sluggishly sticking to the edge

of your molars.

like the flashes of eyes,

across the sea, staring at you

wondering why you blacked out

in a garden that only tends weeds.

like the faint baby blue

in the evening sky, botched

with the runny yolk of ochre.

they stare at you, in condolence

as you give up on your life.

like the bits of pieces of cookies

that ferment your gums,

cavities taking shelter.

a safe abode, but not for you.

we all come and go. rise and return.

air sinking into the roots of earth,

liquid dissolving your bones.

is that why death always comes in bits and pieces,

while your last breath is the final nail

on the coffin of life.

father death, mother life,

is this what we have come back to?

the autumn in your eyes says yes,

the winter in your lips says no.

what do you say?

you don't really say anything.

because death comes in bits and pieces,

or alternatively bits of pieces.

is there a difference? there is.

mother life, father death,

answer me.

if we are all bits and pieces,

where do we really go?

when we are alive.

bits and pieces of life's nest,

bits of pieces in death's coffin.

because a mother always nurtures

and a father always claims.

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Written by
arsonpoet
21 / M / Earth.
Published
Feb 15
Lines·Words
41·229
Notes

an expansive thought on the comparison of life and death with the fleeting moments of life and the fragmentary experiences of the soul. also, dealth colloquially with a lot of antecedent and consequent metaphors to emphasize certain visual elements of the lyrics.

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#life#death#mother#father#soul#seasons#decay
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