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All my senses

All My Senses

 

You say no one sees you.

I see you.

 

I see the inner kid in you

the one most people miss.

I see the need to be clean

the order that keeps the noise quiet.

I see the dreams

still breathing when no one is looking.

 

I see the quiet you.

The thoughtful you.

 

I touch bath water

the way it cools before courage steps in.

I touch puffy eyes

that stayed awake too long for the world.

I touch clothes washed in detergents

most never notice,

familiar enough to feel like home.

I touch foggy glasses

cleared only when you exhale.

 

I smell food

before it becomes a memory.

I smell blood

before fear speaks.

I smell farts

because closeness has no pride.

I smell morning breath

and know it means you stayed.

 

I hear the low tones

others mistake for silence.

I hear the inner kid sounds

when happiness forgets to hide.

I hear footsteps running

to check on me when I am not okay.

I hear the small insults

disguised as love,

and the love that does not disguise itself.

I hear my name

when you say it softly.

 

I taste lips touched by balm

simple, familiar.

I taste the nose

I always taste,

because affection is strange and specific.

I taste your candy

not most people have the candy man.

I taste food passed mouth to mouth

forced, playful, ours.

I taste your recipes

even when you doubt them.

 

All my senses

lean toward you.

Not because no one else exists,

but because I am close enough

to notice.

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