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Letter to H-----

Dear H-----,

 

"I am snowing,

I am falling,

I remember."

 

My key broke in the lock,

so I slept in the cinder block

laundry room, scented with

road salt and old lavender

dryer sheets until you

prodded me carefully awake

with an old flaking broom,

convinced I had broken in

during the whiteout.

 

"I am snowing..."

 

You drilled out the dead brass,

told me of life as a model

in blue-eyed Milan, of growing

up in Puerto Rico, of gorgeous

men you had loved,

were still loving.

 

When we finally got into

my apartment, the TV

had tuned itself to deep sea blue

when the storm knocked out

the cable; the rusted radiator

chattered dimly, rattling

the mottled drapes like

a joyful cathedral veil, heat

coiling round your stories.

 

"I am falling..."

 

At 28 I was so out of touch

with myself, had no names

for raw blitzkrieg feelings

that stacked into tenements

of anger and fear and grief.

 

You, alone, sensed this,

saying Ay, Evan, don't worry

about the girl, the girls,

the job, whatever:

it's all good, all good.

 

Even as you said it, more

snow was racing towards us,

breeding in the plains,

cold shavings and ice drops.

 

"I remember..."

 

You are surely long gone

from DC now. All those girls

I loved are gone, that job

you told me to forget about,

they fired me for seeing

75 movies at an art house

theater on company time.

It was, of course, all worth it.

 

They even gutted the building

where we lived. Yet I still

recall the three-line poem

you wrote to your lover,

taped to your fridge:

 

"I am snowing,

I am falling,

I remember."

 

Best regards in all things,

Evan

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46 / M / DC
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Jan 26
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