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The Plate

my mother washed the same steel plate

until it lost its reflection.

 

I watched her hands—

pruned, patient,

circling the same surface

until the metal couldn't hold her face.

 

the gas ran out while the soap was still foaming.

 

soap, and the luxury of apathy,

are privileges:

who gets to not care,

who gets to finish washing.

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Written by
VanessaRue
16 / F / Mumbai
Published
Jan 9
Lines·Words
11·57
Notes

how do I quote my world, then?

 

when my references are

gas cylinders,

my mother disappearing face in steel

 

when my footnotes are

the afternoon,

the interruption,

the thing that runs out

before you are finished

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