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Trains (The Great Metal Snake)

America on a map! Imagine the northeast corner. I am in Vermont riding the Amtrak southbound. It's raining. The clattering of wheels tearing through rusty iron tracks. Forehead against the cold window's glass, I hear a steam whistle. I look out the window: grey, drizzling. We roll, past the barbed-wire fences that crown the prison fence, past great, soggy fields littered with old tractors, and misty mountains far behind, past brown silos that rise up, thick and crowned with silver heads, past a deer leaping through a rainy field, past a propane company--five great, white propane tanks, past a marsh, harpooned by a telephone pole--a sparrow jumps off the wire, a cemetery on a green hill, little brick towns, the Interstate--rainbow colored tipi in a field behind, past a great, charcoal cliff, hard with sharp creases like a crumpled piece of black construction         paper buried, past a Sunoco station--green dumpster in the parking lot, into a thick wood--past the cold rocks, past brown leaves poking through the dusting on forest floor, past all the pines, which have dandruff, past twiggy sapling branches, only leaves withered and curled like dried jalapenos, over a bridge--the great, cold river, wide and glassy--islands of ice and snow--the riverbank dirt is         hard. The bell dings thrice. The train begins to slow. It stops, jerks me back in my seat. The steam whistle blows. I look out the window. Concrete platform, dark red station & roof, a crowd of boys and girls, standing with perfect posture in sharp blue uniforms, hats adorned with         golden crests, they march on the train and fill up the seats of The Great Metal Snake: hollow and in it people sit, The Great Metal Snake: slithering down the state, It will leave me in a small city soon, at an overcast station, and slither down to D.C., and slither back, with the oily clatter of spinning iron wheels . . . We took the snakes, out of of our nightmares, slimy green sliding through cupped hands to jump and bite your cheek, hanging like a lanyard, or sliding through the sweat of jungle-floors waiting to bite ankles, or coiled in redbarns, on piles of hay with spiders dropping down cold open windows in front of         full moon, full moon: silver train wheel. I hear the steam whistle. We took the snakes, out of our nightmares, dissected them with scalpals, nodded and walked to the drawing board then built. Decades later, the unveiling: The platform crowd leans over the tracks and looks, the bell dings thrice, the steam whistle hisses, the engine is coughing, wheels are chugging-- around the corner He came, with great, clear eyes like glasses: black, iron Anaconda of Industry. His brothers are barreling From New York to Sacramento, Siberia to Stalingrad, Italy to France, under the English channel, down Africa. From Burlington to Brattleboro-- barreling down the state-- I am riding His brother home.
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Nov 23, 2013
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