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~poignancy~

this word rehearses, finding favor and flavor,, inserted, preserving, capturing a mood of smokey inhalation, coloring intensely, darkly, pathos, bathos sweet bitterness, chocolate with vanilla chips, a mockery of sadness, a sadness from mockery, an inherent contradiction, of a welling coverup of what is an overwhelming of the inevitable it’s a well meaning word, even if it’s meaning is poor understood, that conjures up from its very own sounding a washing over of a darkening mood, an evoking & a revocation of the cry out of oy in the litany of daily mishaps poignancy ~ *the quality of evoking a keenly felt sense of emotion, especially of bittersweet sadness or regret* it hides in plain sight, this wistful bitterness, a clot, a clog, in our chest, do so keenly felt, oft without specificity of source, but comforting familiar, almost comforting in its weirdly simplicity and peculiar wayward ways I embrace it, sustain it, ‘‘tis the pointy crooked finger right at me, that disappears and reappears, who me?” like a magician’s favorite trick the rabbit in the hat, the hat on the rabbit, it is the old woman we see, or the image of a young striking sweeping one,^ this back and forth double vision, yes, this inherent contra~ diction, with well tinted emotional noises, the last lasting embrace of breaking up, with wine notes of, of grieving, weeping, loss, and hints of jellied joys *so I ask of you, whom are the who among us, that never know or knew, at least once a day, the comfort of drowning in deep angst, regretting what we have done, and worser,* what we did not do or left undone, the poem of our lives left incomplete… 1:10am truly the first poem of my life this,                                                                        <nml> Mon Dec 8 2025
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nat-lipstadt
99 / M / NYC/Lippstadt/Kraków
For You?
Written by
nat-lipstadt
99 / M / NYC/Lippstadt/Kraków
Published
Dec 8, 2025
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