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Long March

by dusknightshade

Who Whoo Whooo Who are you Who do you want to be Is that your true wish or is that an imposed wish? Who Whoo Whooo can you become when there is no focus from the start? I hear the dinner bell ringing, but no one is coming to see the final feast. Who Whoo Whooo Who are the people that will stand with you? Who are not there with a cracked mask? If we take a look into the mirror, what can be found staring back? Will there be anyone ready for when you are chipped to the bone? Who Whoo Whose there? Nothing but a whisper Nothing but an echo can be heard down the dark tunnel Treading towards the light, Hoping for someone to come join the march
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dusknightshade
23 / F / Lost in Wonderland
For You?
Written by
dusknightshade
23 / F / Lost in Wonderland
Published
Nov 29, 2025
Time
2m
Notes

A perspective on how one can live life. Along using part of the known line of the character from Alice in Wonderland, The Caterpillar: "who are you?"

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#life#alone#friends#family#help#mentality#confusion#question#reflection
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