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iusaaset hypnotized under the acacia tree

Your heavy breathing ever intoxicates me

Inspiring me, so I wade in your breath as a memory

Of you pulsating around me, your palm I am

I abate and hush your godly qualms

 

Drunk on the moment we touched

To touch you was to touch a thousand suns

Knowing me was to see what flames of love could do

As I feverishly traveled loft to low along your staff

 

Yes, from loft to low like the lick of a whip

Until Khonsu finished his routinely turning

To this hour your absence has left these fingers mourning

Tracing hieroglyphs of our dance in the empty air

 

I veil my eyes with wet papyrus

Inscribed within detailed passages of us

Of the first gelling and the first yoke

The first utterance of me you spoke

 

You spoke in prayer and in moans, so do I now

In song to Naunet, in dance and in view

Of our primordial creations, birthing

The ogdoad in Nun’s amniotic waters

 

Visions overcome me, visions of my spirit

Floating like a plank towards the stone, Benben

Where by the waves and tides of the Watery One

I was ushered forth as your hand, more you than our son

 

I promise that at my own will, like that first dawn,

To withstand this chasm that reverence won’t fill

I’ll resign to a post as a servant, to be a fleshly good

To, once again, bear eight seeds in the ground where the acacia stood

 

Do I dare call upon Nun out of sour desperation?

Out of obsessive longing that curdles in my stomach as milk

That coats and slicks my body with seven sacred scents

O Inert One, dissolve this cosmos back to it whence came

To be, again, the hand that peels the skin of the snake

 

If not, then Atum, assign me to lull and serenade you

With my touch, in the center of a lotus flower, perched open

At the peak of the pyramid mound, with gaping mouths

As I bring forth the eruption of life from you, Atum

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acacia
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Published
Nov 13, 2025
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this is A DRAFTTTT not finishedd ill probably scrap dis

working on some art songs and arias to go to an eventual libretto.... ehhhhhhhhhhhhh

the rhymed version was this

your heavy breathing still intoxicates me

so I wade in your hot breath as a memory

of your pulsating around me, your palm

I am, to abate and hush your godly qualms

I cover my eyes with wet papyrus

detailed written passages of us

of our fusion, of when we yoked,

thus the first utterance of me you spoke

in prayer and in debt, with help of Amen

my spirit floats like a plank, back to the benben

stone, where by the waves and tides of Nun

I was ushered as your hand, more you than our son

so at my own choice, again, at my own will

so to withstand this chasm that reverence won't fill

I'll resign, a servant for your fleshly good

to, again, bear eight seeds where the acacia stood

to touch you was to touch a thousand suns

knowing me was to see what flames of love had done

hot and ferocious, feverish and burning

still your absence has me mourning

but i never write rhyme.. like at all. im just trying to write some arias and a libretto.

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