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Talking with God

by @dopster1

The very first time, i got down on my knees to pray didnt know were to start, didnt have a clue what to say both parents diagnosed, i was hurting that day i needed answers from the higher powers at play why god why, i just couldnt understand , is there anything i could do to change whats at hand was there anything i could say to stops whats been planned is there anything god ill obey on command what seemed like forever of begging and pleading i heard a voice like no other, which said slow down with your breathing a warm embrace, such a beautiful feeling i knew right there and then it was god i was hearing, we talked for hours with understanding and reasoning he said your cries your pleas have no real substance, no true meaning ask with true intent, and mean with true true believing i felt so blessed with all i was receiving i was raised from my knees, as gods voice began to fade his final message was im glad that you prayed in that moment i come to terms, both parents would be taken someday i just had one last request to god, is that they carry no pain
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43 / M / bolton
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Nov 11, 2025
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