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[City Bridges (6th draft)]

Indigenous citizen struggling to stay civilized amidst monolithic visages, structures stone-faced and stoic witnesses; overhead, gargoyles grin— hideous grimaces guarding ever vigilant. Inhospitable city grid dimly lit, rain's residual liquid slicks gritty asphalt glistened, blacktop igneous pavement glittering– shimmering in rigid obsidian. Hidden within this vision visits solitude, unsolicited– loneliness exhibited, never fitting in; island imprisonment as bridges begin quivering above stygian rivers grim, abysmal reflections glint, swimming in viridian. Water's brim risen to vertiginous limits I see flitting images of cataclysmic collision with frigidness obliterating to oblivion. A dismal wish reminded by a grisly glimpse of figments vivid since residual shiver imprints from winter's winds whipping shins and thinning skin; I cringe, wither, wince, my eyelids squint– but I still live, so no longer motionless my frostbitten digits grip, limbs never given in to blizzard's pins or crystalline prisms– I walk, despite icy splinters and misery digging in my ambition wins.
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Written by
CatDadJynx
31 / M
Published
Oct 14, 2025
Lines·Words
64·152
Notes

[I use a rhyming dictionary and usually learn words/things as a result... here are some less commonly used words (to save anyone the time having to look them up)...

Visage (vizij) - 1. the surface of an object presented to view, 2. a person's facial expression.

Stygian (stij-ee-uhn) - of or relating to the river Styx.

Viridian (vr·i·dee·uhn) - a blueish green color.

Vertiginous (vur·tij·i·nuhs) - causing vertigo, especially by being extremely high or steep.]

Read this one at a poetry slam last night and was shaking so bad that I was practically stuttering by the end lmfao. Definitely a tongue twister though, damn. This one took me over a year to write (wasn't til I started over from the ground up that it finally fell into place), and i finished it about a year ago (a couple months before I finally tried to kms)... Definitely doing a lot better these days but still a reminder to myself for when things get dark

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