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To Please My Father

by @TitaHalaman

He taught me form before feeling —
 wrists locked,
 chin down, 
 no follow-through too wild. Spoke in parables of greens and grit, 
gripped the world like a 9-iron: 
firm, exact,
 white-knuckled love. I bent to angles he approved,
 measured wind, 
not wonder —
 and called it becoming.
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TitaHalaman
26 / F / Manila, PH
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Written by
TitaHalaman
26 / F / Manila, PH
Published
Sep 16, 2025
Time
1m
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A poem for a painting

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