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Sep 11
by Geof, glucose-aware and still poetic

๐Ÿž White Bread
Soft as a lullaby, sliced with ease,
it cradles the butter, it aims to please.
But oh, the spike, the stealthy riseโ€”
I pass it by with narrowed eyes.

๐Ÿฅ” Mashed Potatoes
Creamy clouds on a Sunday plate,
they whisper comfort, they tempt fate.
I count the carbs, I dodge the mashโ€”
a spoonful now feels brash and rash.

๐Ÿš White Rice
Polished pearls in a steaming heap,
they lull the tongue, they make me weep.
I swap for barley, quinoaโ€™s cheerโ€”
but jasmine still draws near, too near.

๐Ÿ Pasta
Twists and ribbons, sauce-soaked bliss,
a tangled kiss I dearly miss.
I twirl restraint around my forkโ€”
and serve up lentils, squash, or cork.

๐Ÿ• Pizza Crust
Golden edge of molten sin,
it holds the cheese, it reels me in.
I nibble toppings, dodge the baseโ€”
a crustless life, a slower pace.

๐Ÿฅž Pancakes
Stacked like dreams on a diner tray,
they rise with syrup, then betray.
I flip my cravings, count the tollโ€”
and let the almond batter roll.

๐ŸŸ French Fries
Crisp rebellion in a paper cone,
they crunch like joy, they moan and groan.
I sniff, I sigh, I walk awayโ€”
my pancreas has final say.

๐Ÿฟ Popcorn (buttered)
Movie-night muse,
a salty flirt, it pops with glee,
it wears a shirt of melted gold and hidden costโ€”
I portion small, or mourn the lost.

๐Ÿฅ– Bagels
Dense and proud, a chewy ring,
they sing of brunch and everything.
I slice regret, I halve the roundโ€”
and seek a thinner, safer sound.

๐Ÿฐ Cake
Frosted lies in layered form,
they dance at birthdays, sweet and warm.
I toast with berries, skip the sliceโ€”
and write a poem in sacrifice.

๐Ÿฉบ Final Verse: The Reckoning
So here I stand, carb-curious still,
with measured joy and tempered will.
I mourn the feast; I praise the fightโ€”
and find new sweetness in the light.
Geof Spavins
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Geof Spavins  67/M/United Kingdom
(67/M/United Kingdom)   
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