Sep 3
everyone is going to their place of dream
their pen and papers screams pride and dignity
and in the fate's script it only talks about my failure
my efforts led me to nowhere but my defeat
i'm envious of everyone who got to follow their dreams
i learnt about the stars, galaxies and cosmos
so one day i could steal a portion of their shine
to add in my name
learnt a language to study in a foreign land
but my dreams collapsed, i cried, i state
their pen and papers screams pride and dignity
and in the fate's script it only talks about my failure
my efforts led me to nowhere but my defeat
i'm envious of everyone who got to follow their dreams
i learnt about the stars, galaxies and cosmos
so one day i could steal a portion of their shine
to add in my name
learnt a language to study in a foreign land
but my dreams collapsed, i cried, i state
Written on- May 20, 2024
This is the original version of my poem "Cosmic Longing: Un Amore Irragguiungible" that i re-wrote on July 24, 2025 because i thought my message was not clear in this piece. But now that i think about it, that certainly was the most confusing version of this poem i had wrote. Even though the message is same, i treat this one poem as different. It speaks of the heartbreak the earlier one failed to speak.
This is the original version of my poem "Cosmic Longing: Un Amore Irragguiungible" that i re-wrote on July 24, 2025 because i thought my message was not clear in this piece. But now that i think about it, that certainly was the most confusing version of this poem i had wrote. Even though the message is same, i treat this one poem as different. It speaks of the heartbreak the earlier one failed to speak.
