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Looking at Stars

by MaanvinderPilania

just looking at the stars my curiosity reaches its high and tells me to fly through them i will enter the interstellar space- a place between the stars that will send me love for coming trillions of miles apart the love which is different from the one that you get on your planet where bodies are buried everywhere and ashes in the soil the love which is different that will never hurt you and one can dream of it after death just looking at the stars makes me want to fly through them for once i can't wait for everything to end
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MaanvinderPilania
21 / M / India
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Written by
MaanvinderPilania
21 / M / India
Published
Sep 2, 2025
Time
2m
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Written on- February 9, 2024

This poem has been sitting in my drafts for over a year now and i never tried to finish it until today. I had to edit some lines to match the setting of this poem. This poem is about escapism, the kind of escapism one can have through death where i feel like their soul will fly through the stars. Whenever i look at the sky, this has always been my wish.

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