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Aug 8
by Geof the cheeky breakfast bard

I tossed some thoughts into the blend
A cup of hope, a half-wilted friend.
Banana peel of bygone days,
And berries bruised by wistful haze.

Almond milk of maybe-so,
A mango flash of long ago.
One dash of “should’ve,” chilled regret,
A swirl of dreams not done just yet.

I stirred it once with quiet grace,
Poured in a smile, pulp to face.
Some leafy truths, still bold and green,
From tangled vines of might-have-been.

Then irony, that spry old spice,
Snuck in with “wisdom's” thin advice
“Regret's a flavour for the brave,
Served best in chalice we misgave.”

I shaved some ginger, sharp, sincere
To cleanse the gut of latent fear.
And as the final blend grew thick,
I sipped, then sighed, “That did the trick.”
Emotional Calories: 250 FPV

Key Ingredients of Feeling: Regret purée, blended nostalgia, spice of sincerity

MSI (Metaphoric Saturation Index): 🍓 High – rich poetic fusion with layered introspection
Geof Spavins
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Geof Spavins  67/M/United Kingdom
(67/M/United Kingdom)   
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