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deuteranopia

my eyes surveil an unconscious world

saturation, a curse

who cares if my blood is a deep crimson

or my veins a bluish hue

my sadness are clouds permeating a blue sky

pupils fear the eyelids

darkness is a danger

no color saves me there

the lens of my eye crack, reflect

they film all the mechanical details

robots moving, smiling:

all silver, all wiring faulty

my eyes are no different from a digital camera

i can never capture true color, nor true beauty

the red of a rose pierces my iris, and leaves its trail on the whites of my eyes.

 

her eyes surveil a waking world

deuteranopia, skewing her views

the rods and cones of her eyes rebelling against her sight

the red of blood and the green of grass blend into a singular shade

an olive, or mustard color, it’s not unpleasant

the sunset is painted differently

like God mixed different paints when He stroked his brush across the sky

the sun shines all the same

the brightness still leaves spots in her vision, and reflected in her eyes are the words

words i will never understand

the film of her eyes run out, constantly

black reels spool out of her eyes, like tears

but she smiles still

she can’t see the difference between a tomato and an apple

but the sweetness is still there

her lens have been cracked, but glued together

by the colors of her soul.

 

its blind to me

my eyes fade to static, while hers heightens in quality

perhaps it is why i have been staring at her,

while she stares at the sun.

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22 / M / California
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Jul 25, 2025
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