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Mac Thom
Poems
2d
The Race
To warm up we walked
to the ravine;
we could both wear my father’s
old running shoes.
You wanted to talk
about us and if
I’d stayed with your mom,
what we’d of done?
We started to run
into the ravine,
we jostled and touched,
“I would’ve done this…and been more tenacious,”
— you’d already heard,
so we horsed
on the narrowing path
until you disappeared.
I caught you up
the last twenty steps out
of the ravine,
you smiled: “Old man,
you’re going down,”
and we raced the half-mile
back to the house, where you turned
to watch me return;
how I lost
with all of my heart,
so far behind;
I’d thought
I seemed more than I was,
but you weren’t surprised
how easy
you’d put me to rest.
Written by
Mac Thom
Canada
(Canada)
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