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Geof Spavins
Poems
Jul 14
The Hollow Mantle of Scented Memory
You hold the slender stick of incense
between thumb and forefinger,
a quiet question framed in sandalwood.
A tap of flame at its tip
awakens latent murmurs
that curl upward in a pale spiral.
Smoke drifts like a slow confession,
tracing loops in the still air,
an unseen calligraphy of scent.
Each breath you draw expands
that hidden manuscript:
cloves, myrrh, cedar; fingers of dusk.
At the stick’s hollow heart, the flame wanes,
leaving a halo of ember
that shifts from red to ash.
Grey granules rain in silent punctuation,
each flake a remnant phrase
of transformation written in dust.
Your palm catches the residue,
a fine, silver testament
to what must become nothing.
The aroma lingers,
a ghost ache in the room,
mapping absence where presence bloomed.
Ash drifts down like memories;
tender, ephemeral, luminous;
and the stick stands hushed, hollowed.
In that hollow core, you glimpse
the space between flame and ash,
presence and departure.
You cradle the empty stick
as if it still holds a promise,
a threshold waiting to be crossed.
Written by
Geof Spavins
67/M/United Kingdom
(67/M/United Kingdom)
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