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Still, I Try

I can't close my eyes

tears gather.

I can't breathe

the air is stuck.

I can't gulp

my throat is tight.

 

I try to plant my dream,

but land is

barren

 

Still, I try.

Even my conscience

mocks me.

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Written by
Immortality
19 / F / on mars
Published
Jun 13, 2025
Lines·Words
12·39
Notes

It’s that moment when giving up feels easier, everything is against you;

but you can’t, because giving up just isn’t you.

¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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#depression#burnout#emotionalpain#innerstrength#hope#mental#struggle#silencealone#pressure#healing
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