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May 4
“Will this rabbit’s foot
Bring me good luck?”
Said the bunny to the sheep
Pointing to her tired feet
Having walked too far
In the wrong pair of shoes

“Probably not”
Silenced the sheep,
“It’s all water under the bridge”
(But the bridge had long since
Been washed out)

The animal crossing
Makes for a good story
& traditions are fun
But horoscopes are useless
When fates rest in human hands

Anyway,
“Happy New Year”
whispered a cheery moon.
“Let’s all just enjoy the day”
While the little Leo children,
Laughed to find red envelopes
& danced with the lions.
Originally published 21st Jan 2023 on DUP

I’ve been playing with AI uses more lately & was curious how it would interpret this more cryptic piece. While there are 3 secrets in the symbolism it could never know, chatGPT gave a decent breakdown.
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