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So Obtuse
Poems
Apr 26
Young Love
I knew in a moment—
my heart fell fast.
In your eyes,
I was caught—
in a love
meant to last.
Your hand in mine,
like a thread through time.
And in that second?
The world
was mine.
You laughed
like a song
only I knew.
And I held
every word—
like it might not be true.
Each look
was a fire.
Each touch,
a flame.
And nothing we felt
ever once
felt like shame.
But your father—
he stood there
still.
With a wary stare
and a warning to ****
what we had
before it flew too far.
Said:
Love takes time, son.
Don’t chase a star.
It burns too bright.
It fades too fast.
Young love is fire—
but it never lasts.
He told me to walk.
To spare you the pain.
To disappear
before we both go insane.
But I looked in his eyes
and I said quietly—
If she’s gonna hurt…
Then let it be me.
Not the man she believes in.
Not the one she adores.
Not the first love she’s known
who then slams the door.
If I break her?
Time might heal the ache.
But if you do it…
it’s a different break.
You’ll teach her that love
isn’t worth the risk.
That it ends
in silence,
in rules,
in a fist.
Let her feel it.
Let her fall.
Let her rise,
even if she crawls.
Because love—
even young—
isn’t always a lie.
It can teach us to live
even when we say goodbye.
So if it must end…
then I’ll take the fall.
But don’t be the reason
she builds up a wall.
Let her believe
that her heart can be free.
And if it must break?
Then let it
be me.
My personal experience.
Written by
So Obtuse
60/M/Ca
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