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Aug 2010
Lost in a lover's maze of hope
your words twisting this way
turning with deft
deadening at I love you
but I'm not out yet

Where is the exit?
I can't be guided on words
lead me, show me, grab my hand..
take it in yours.
Your touch, your love, it knows the way.
Or will I stay forever playing this game?
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Written by
Jane
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