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2d
Save me, so sweetly,
with your expert advice
on how to live someone else's life.

Advice is π‘›π‘œπ‘‘ opinion.
It should be dissected, examinedβ€”
an understanding of π‘šπ‘¦ situation.

Put yourself in my π‘šπ‘–π‘›π‘‘,
not just in my shoes.
Tell me what I’ve forgotten,
π‘Ÿπ‘’π‘šπ‘–π‘›π‘‘ meβ€”don’t remake me.

Open my eyes to π‘šπ‘¦ goal, not yours.
Tell me how to achieveβ€”
π‘›π‘œπ‘‘ what you believe.

Otherwise, don’t be surprised
when I seem not to listen.

I do.

I π‘Žπ‘™π‘€π‘Žπ‘¦π‘  do.

But only the good advice
will be used.

Still, I should be thankful
for how kindly you’ve killed me.

And now,
what an honorβ€”
for you to save me, so sweetly.
**** Me Kindly Pt. 2
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