"The heavenly stars are on fire," you wrote—so I traced their embers in your lines, but where’s the smoke? Perhaps it lingers between syllables, between a stick figure future and a melting past, between the chaos you ransom and the whispers you inflame.
"Some locks need two keys," you mused—so tell me, Anaïs, does poetry need two voices to unlock a moment? Because your words unfasten thought, weave mischief into meaning, turn science into sentiment— each stanza a blade, a bloom, a rebellion.
You run from hackneyed halls, freewheeling with Johnny Cash, eluding rulers and repressive lies— and somehow, still, you pause to drop a pizza emoji, a signature, a hunger that ink alone won’t satisfy.
So tell me, Yale’s ink-stained philosopher, do you write in crust and cheese too? Does every stanza deserve a side of marinara? Because if poetry is fuel, then surely, you are proof that pizza and prose can both be divine addictions.