Aug 2010
hide me on your mind
hit me at your heart
beneath our skin
beyond our sky
blowing thru move
sounding true love
try me in your find
lost me into yous
heart’*****
mind’s hide
above
mean
wide
bluesssssss
hit me at your heart
beneath our skin
beyond our sky
blowing thru move
sounding true love
try me in your find
lost me into yous
heart’*****
mind’s hide
above
mean
wide
bluesssssss
I'd like to know about the grammatical correctness of this poem, once I don't pratice english regularly. Thanks for comments!
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