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Feb 4
when i am so far down
that my troubles are blue
no lower to sink
i'm just as troubled as you

as i look all around
i soak up the rays
you stand right behind me
right there you stay

i hurt on the inside
you have got none
flat on the pavement
having no fun

i'm just the figure that cast
you are left beside
so dismal we feel
distressed and combined

we're faulty andΒ Β fragile
to troubled to guide
we move to the darkness
so contrast can hide

just because i hurt
does not mean that you deserve
feeling no worth
just to exist and to observe
This is my first complete poem ever 20 years ago.

this one is deep as **** on sadness
Craig Strong
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Craig Strong  48/M/United States
(48/M/United States)   
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