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Reviewing: THE SITUATION

somehow
summer
was losing it

forgetting her lines
missing
her cues

putting on a well
below par performance
having to be prompted

becoming
a bit of
an embarrassment

then: one day summer
just didn't show
the day panicked

Autumn, who had been
understudying summer
declared to God

she could play her
she knew
the part by heart

word perfect
could play her
in her sleep

so Autumn
far too early
in the run

put in a performance
that was - well. . .
justΒ Β not summer

stars began to look
more brittle...colder
leaves bled red

couples cuddled closer
more for warmth
than...the other thing

me who
had a front row seat
up at the old lake

put in a tired review
"They just don't
make a summer

like they
****** well
used to!"
Donall Dempsey
Written by
Donall Dempsey  Guildford
(Guildford)   
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