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Donall Dempsey
Poems
1d
Reviewing: THE SITUATION
Reviewing: THE SITUATION
somehow
summer
was losing it
forgetting her lines
missing
her cues
putting on a well
below par performance
having to be prompted
becoming
a bit of
an embarrassment
then: one day summer
just didn't show
the day panicked
Autumn, who had been
understudying summer
declared to God
she could play her
she knew
the part by heart
word perfect
could play her
in her sleep
so Autumn
far too early
in the run
put in a performance
that was - well. . .
justΒ Β not summer
stars began to look
more brittle...colder
leaves bled red
couples cuddled closer
more for warmth
than...the other thing
me who
had a front row seat
up at the old lake
put in a tired review
"They just don't
make a summer
like they
****** well
used to!"
Written by
Donall Dempsey
Guildford
(Guildford)
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