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Salted (S)Pines

Like sparkling water, your breath punctuates every gulp— Sharp and cold, I come back for more, At your behest—like saffroned ice cubes on the eyelids. A sober delight. Scrubbing the grout in between the tiles with black salts, Pale like drying sunscreen, piercing my palate with cedar— Where did the subtlety go?
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Written by
ranveerjoshua
22 / M / Toronto
Published
Jan 19, 2025
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The Cosmos—Short Fiction

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